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Saturday, May 15, 2010

Ocean Of Love

22 comments:

V Rakesh said...

Lines that convey hope and warmth and a sense of reassurance that one can indeed voice one's feelings!

Cheers

Rakesh
http://almostsunday.blogspot.com/

Jay said...

@ V Rakesh
thnks rakesh.....

♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ said...

awww... so sweet x))
I am so sorry i thought i was following you..but thanks...for reminding me..you hv got a wonderfull blog here :))

oh well.. i am not an expert in poetry..i am still learning..
i loved this lines..
haha! you're really nice..

Jay said...

@ choco lover hey thnks its so nice of u....

Sandee said...

Love the poem. You romantic devil you.

You are not in my buddies list. Thanks for asking.

Have a terrific day. :)

anupama said...

Dear Jay,
Good Morning!
The lines are lovely!
I disagree with you with the last two lines!
The whole purity and intensity of the strong four letter word is gone!
To love or to be loved make a sea change in one's life!
If she/he doesn't say no to one's love,he/she will lose many things.
One feels hurt,sad,the severe pain of rejection!
But it is better to express the true feelings!
Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,
Sasneham,
Anu

sakhii•• said...

beautiful....!!
specially d last stanza...very true..!!
thnx 4 visiting;)

Jay said...

@ sandee thnks bro ....it was so nice of u....

Jay said...

@anupama
hi it was nice of u 2 drop by...
anywaz anu there r 2 sides of everything...the way u see things and the way they really are....
agreed that

"To love or to be loved make a sea change in one's life!
If she/he doesn't say no to one's love,he/she will lose many things."

the pain will be for 4 sometime until u meet some1 else...
bt dont u think if he/she carries his/her feelings without expressing, then it will be more painful & will last longer .....
so if compare both, then comparatively we dont lose much, if we express....
thats wat i meant.......

anywaz it was nice 2 hear frm u.....

WINDOWLAD said...

A most wonderful read and truly you've moments out there that are really movin'... Have a good day!!!:)

BTW, i'm your newest follower... keep on writing more poems!!!:)

.kelvin

Jay said...

@sakhi thnks 4 reading......nice 2 hear that u liked it......

Jay said...

@windowlad thnks 4 nice comment....kelvin...me too following u...hope 2 c more frm u.....

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Hi!
Just came across your blog :)
Loved the poem. It's so true!
You write really well. Glad I dropped in :)
Take Care!
Happy Blogging ♪♫

Jay said...

@lonely dreamer
hey thnks for dropping by.....so nice to have u here...

tim said...

words that speaks love.. whoa, awesome.. love love love!

Gauri Mathur said...

Sweet!!
:)

Jay said...

@tim thnks tim......

Jay said...

@gauri thanks gauri

Mary said...

Hi Jay, it's nice to meet you. Thank you for stopping by and leaving me a comment. I'll be by to visit a little more later - am busy getting ready for the wedding rehearsal dinner we are hosting here.

Blessings!

Jay said...

@mary So nice of u mary......thnks neway for dropping by.......good luck 4 d rehearsals

♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ said...

Thanks for following me :)
Do come back again!

Jay said...

@lonely dreamer wid pleasure...i will